Creating a Storyboard based on my first script

I created my storyboarding based on my first script of the opening sequence to get a clear and better understanding of my camerawork and mis-en-scene for my film opening. My drawing skills are average, but I have done my best. 

Below is my first attempt storyboard for my opening sequence.

Learning Outcome

Creating this storyboard really helped to bring out what I have visualized in my mind for this film opening. However, I realized that until I do the mock shoot, I won't be able to finalize this as I haven't properly filmed with these shots and angles, and I can't take this storyboard as a final one so this will be my draft storyboard.